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 Post subject: Short Stories, Poems etc.
PostPosted: Sun Sep 21, 2008 11:02 pm 
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I saw that you had one for fan art but nothing for poems, songs and other things you may have written about Summer. I can't draw so I thought it best to start one about writing. That I can do.

I'll kick off with a poem I have written.

http://www.greatwriting.co.uk/content/view/16412/67/

Please enjoy.

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 Post subject: Re: Short Stories, Poems etc.
PostPosted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 3:26 pm 
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I wrote this song 15 years ago

My throat is dry because it’s terrible.
It’s this wild fire in me.
That moment I saw your gaze, my heart skipped a beat.
It’s like torture.
I can’t stand it because I love you.

Ever since I fell in love with you my heart skips a beat whenever I see a girl with hair like yours.

“I’ve finally discovered a miracle where the gods lost to a couple”

From now on, my thoughts of you will only shine and grow stronger.
There’s so much I want to say in so little time.
You are now the only person that my eyes can see.
“Something is starting”

I’m simple.
I saw the result of a horoscope, I wanted to reveal the ideal type of person for you.

“So!? Please give me wings god!”

This time I want to understand you and take you somewhere far away.
Confined on a desert island, we’ll love each other forever.
I only ask that you reach out your hand.
“It’s hopeful from now on”

I can’t understand you that easily so what should I do?
There’s not enough data to explain the things that I know.
Now my courage has been scattered.
“Let’s keep our desires”

Whatever it is, it’ll be disappointing so lets tryout everything.
No one has the right answer.
I’m already praying in my mind.
“Something’s beginning”
“It’s hopeful from now on”
“Let’s keep our wishes”
All right!!

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 Post subject: Re: Short Stories, Poems etc.
PostPosted: Tue Sep 23, 2008 7:20 pm 
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That's a beautiful piece who did you write that for? Whoever it is or was I hope you showed them it. Man that really moved me.

Thanks for sharing and hope you keep writing like that.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 10:01 am 
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Who did I write the song for who else but summer
I liked you poem it truly sounded for the heart
Heres one more this one came to me in a dream

Oh, you know
You know what to say
Say” I love you”

Oh, I think you’ve go to know right away
“Maybe me too”

You
You are a nice, cool breeze in me
I feel you blowing in me

I can feel the sunlight all around me
You’re shinning

I feel beautiful when I’m around you
I’m safe and comfortable
Cause you are wonderful
It feels natural to be around you
You’ve made it possible
You’re wonderful

You
You are a deep, strong wind in me
I feel you come on in

Can you see the sunlight all around me
You’re smiling

I feel beautiful when I’m around you
I’m safe and comfortable
Cause you are wonderful
It feels natural to be around you
You’ve made it possible
You’re wonderful

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 Post subject: Re: Short Stories, Poems etc.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 10:17 am 
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Very nice !

Im currently writing a story with Summer in mind for one of the main characters and so far it goes well. I only regret I can not share it here with ya all.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 2:57 pm 
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When it is finished you could post a link to it on here or even posted the story on here if you get permission. I'd love to read your story sometime.

Mei Mei wrote:
Very nice !

Im currently writing a story with Summer in mind for one of the main characters and so far it goes well. I only regret I can not share it here with ya all.


sharing things like that is what I made this topic for.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 24, 2008 4:35 pm 
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Ya, but I write in my native language and it's NOT english. ;)

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Mei Mei wrote:
Ya, but I write in my native language and it's NOT english. ;)


I see that causes a problem, but give me enough time and I'll find a way round it.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 25, 2008 10:08 am 
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adam_s wrote:
Mei Mei wrote:
Ya, but I write in my native language and it's NOT english. ;)


I see that causes a problem, but give me enough time and I'll find a way round it.


LOL! With such an attitude I see no way you couldn't spend you 24 hours with Summer ... sooner or later :lol:

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Aw thanks, the people on this forum are so nice, I've been kicked off of similar forums for being honest and having an opinion but you guys just take me as I come. :D

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